Teachers have god complex?

In reaction to the story I wrote on ‘Fake News Reporting Encourages Fighting Teachers,’ Dendude posted his comment saying, he, too was detained for telling the truth. He questions the god complex of teachers. Here is his comment. My reply follows.

posted by Dendude on 10/23/2006 05:29
I have no doubt's that even if this note is fake, somewhere out there is a teacher that is incorrectly teaching exactly that. Example: When I was in 4th grade a science teacher was explaining to the class that the shadows created on the moon during the different phases were created by the earth casting a shadow, I said that I thought the shadows were created by the moon itself and that a lunar eclipse is the only time the earth casts a shadow on the moon. I too was labeled a trouble maker for daring to question their authority, even though I was right. I refused to back down and I too was given a detention....for being right.

It is my belief that all too many teachers suffer from the same affliction as doctor, it's called a God complex. They actually feel that they are superior to any of the students, and no student (especially a 9 year old one) could know more than themselves. Twenty five years later I am dating a woman with a 8 year old son, we were in the back yard one night and I was showing him the different constellations and he asked me about the moon. I explained the different phases of the moon and what caused the "shadow" that we see. I then asked him to ask his teacher the next day the same question......the answer??? The shadows on the moons surface are caused by the earth.

The ignorance is astounding

Hey, Dendude,

You made a very intelligent comment. But first, let's veer away from the issue of news legitimacy and shift to the teacher issue - because it is what you're dealing with.

I used to be a teacher in college - in Philosophy even. I would welcome questions and I would reward students who dared to challenge my views. I would intentionally write erroneous things on the board to see who of them were thinking.

You see, students had long been conditioned just to listen to teachers and therefore student talk is scarce. Nobody asks questions.

Yes, teachers do make errors. That's why they have to study their lessons always. Nobody ever claimed they are infallible.

Dendude, why don't you write about this thing? It would be an interesting feature. I'll be your first reader.

A statue is just a concrete block

Jesus Statue Carries Cross After Storm

Posted by zzzx47 Fri Oct 20 14:50 MST

iTakNews.com

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Have you noticed that this "news" says –

Distributed by Internet Broadcasting Systems, Inc. This material may not be published, broadcast, rewritten or redistributed.

Do you know that this serves as a disclaimer? The "news" rating is dubious then. Zero credibility. The source does not even want to be responsible for the publication.

With sources like this, it is better not to re-distribute it even by way of linking.

And may I add: That's only a statue. It has no power over anything. It is just a concrete block.

Mainstream Media Credit not attractive anymore

ARTICLE FEEDBACK
FOR
Vincent Maher
re Blogger's Investigation Ousts Swedish Minister

You have underscored “has not been credited” by mainstream media. As for me, I would not depend too much on them. Before, they were the kings. In the context of today, they are not.

The point is that production of information is not only for the powerful nowadays. It is only that they have the machinery, and the usual audience that are mostly advertisers. But today, with technology and open access to the Internet, citizens have learned that they do not have to kowtow anymore to traditional media which lords it over in mainstream media. Blogging is just as powerful. The information highways now have almost equalized access to ideas and their dissemination.

On constructive nudging, this is where we can play our part as bloggers. There are many issues around that are not touched by traditional journalists. In the Philippines, for example, no one is paying attention to the evil effects of block voting done by a religious sect that is courted even by presidential candidates. After elections, the sect collects in so many ways, putting its influence in many quarters in as sensitive as law enforcement and justice. I’ve done my part here. I’ve sent my challenge to investigative journalists. It remains to be seen if someone has the guts to follow up and act on it.

What religious freedom in the Philippines?

Dear Jose Katigbak,
STAR, Washington Bureau

Funny story you wrote!

What religious freedom in the Philippines?

"Generally respected" is a neutral description but was blown up in your title to "praises" as to impress to the readers that the Philippines indeed is enjoying religious freedom. How could the US government be praising another government that prefers to practice selective perception?

It is not just to the Muslims that the Philippine government is failing to score in terms of religious freedom. The Movies and Television Review and Classification Board (MTRCB) alone under the Office of the President and headed by Ma. Consoliza Laguardia is patently biased and along human rights and religious freedom has dismal, dispiriting scores. Laguardia has been partial to the Ang Dating Daan ever since, while favoring the interests of another group. Please read -

Church Politicking may Push RP as Country of Particular Concern

Soriano, the Great Communicator, Will Not Budge

Mangled Tapes set to make Muslims hit Christian Preacher

I hope you’ll get to know why these things are happening.

When the guys prefer to scratch each other’s back, then they begin to tear someone to pieces so that they can continue with their shenanigans.

This is what we call a system – an evil system – and there is no religious freedom in it.

Fury as academics claim 9/11 was 'inside job'

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An inside job would not be logical. But the FBI, the CIA, the NSA and whatever agencies involved - going all for the glory, never wanting to share data, secretly wanting to grab the limelight alone when one day they catch the big one - is logical.

A mere “inside job” speculation like this does not help any. It only confirms the West’s inability to distinguish moderate Islamists from the extremists and in so doing advance the cause of the latter. Ever heard of the new Muslim consciousness?

While much effort are being spent to understand the ideology of these people and make for sensible approaches toward solutions, careless talk and actions from the academe meanwhile gnaw faster to decimate such efforts without any idea how such talk can work to backfire. And how! In the end, bin Laden’s dreams, in the noise of all these theorizing, may see fulfillment as their hero’s statistics of American catch is toted up.

Harry Potter, signature of the king of darkness

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Amen to that. Satan is the prince of the air, riding roughshod over communication lines - albeit subtly. If one is not careful over what he views and what he reads, then he or she may be influenced by these forms of broadcasts. Ever heard of subliminal messages? There are a lot on TV these days.

Let's say you are fond of viewing drama where people's language are corrupt and the characters are beautiful but the behavior is more base than that of an animal. Without your knowing it, eventually, you would be receiving the language and the behavior as normal and acceptable even, that you begin to internalize them as part of your system.

Now, I understand why my elders proscribed the viewing of such films. The mind is better kept pristine from the ways of this world. Really, one doesn't have to taste poison to know it's poison.

An Island Is Born

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I have been watching an island this size from a distance and the effect is poetic. The island changes shape. It's not the same throughout. Some days it looks like the letter O, sometimes a C, sometimes an L, sometimes an S. And sometimes you don't see it at all, but this is very rare. It all depends upon the play of tide on it. The island is very white at times too, and sometimes very pink. This is the effect of corals on it. I wrote a poem about this island, in fact.

I hope this one doesn't disappear.

Half-baked news foisted on us again

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Once again, there is news with so many quotation marks for blind items and many loopholes. Who are "informed sources close to the mediations" that Hoda Osman used as sources?

Osman wrote >>>>>The U.S. secretly negotiated with the group through leaders of "the Palestinian popular resistance committees." Who are these leaders and these committees? What were this group's "real demands?"

Most of all, what are the identities of those two Fox News journalists in Gaza, supposedly kidnapped on August 14 that are the subjects of this news? With all these ambiguities in this account, this so-called “news” is half-baked!

So, when will traditional reporting of this kind change?

What are we to imitate?

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How could a mere homo sapiens imitate Jesus Christ on his walking on water? Remember, He is also spirit - of a level very much different from man's category, therefore capable of doing things man cannot do.

This is also not the point Christ wanted to make. We are not to imitate His miracles. If we are to imitate Him, it should be in loving our brother as He had exemplified. Love, He said, is the greatest commandment that man must follow.

The story exemplifies the great accountability of anyone preaching for Christ. If one lacks understanding, then he may not have been appointed for the job.

Hanging young girl for "having a sharp tongue"

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Everywhere you go, you can read of Freedom of Speech being nailed to its cross many times over in a day. Or so they thought.

However, Freedom of Speech is a spirit.

It cannot die – as long as there are fighters willing to fight for it.

If the young girl's sin was only in reminding the religious judge “to punish the main perpetrators of moral corruption not the victims,” who do you think is more in the right?

Who has killed more, Satan or God?

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Wrong mathematics! How could satan have killed only 10? Killing is not just physical! The worst kind of death is spiritual and satan has caused many to die that way - and is still at it.

Katrina rescuer is sued by boat owner

>>>>> A Broadmoor man who said he rescued more than 200 residents after commandeering a boat left by a neighbor during the flood after Hurricane Katrina is being sued by the boat's owner for taking it "without...

In case of emergency, asking permission for the use of anything takes a backseat. Where life is at stake and societal interest is concerned, the owner of everything is the owner of owners. How base to stoop that low. Are the lives of 200 dependent on his measly permission?

Da Vinci coders vandalising

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Such kind of treasure hunting now validates the brainsick effects of that Da Vinci novel. Meanwhile, Dan Brown can just laugh out loud at these fools believing every fairy tale he has churned out while he enjoys his money without any sense of responsibility.

Research - not an excuse for lazy bones

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Young people need to be trained to wake up early. Therefore, they should sleep early to be able to do this. If melatonin after puberty does not show up until 9 or 10 p.m. or whatever time, the child is still responsible for seeing to it that he or she is out of bed to do his tasks at the proper time. Waking up early is a healthy habit to develop.

Classes are not the only reason for waking up early. There is making use of the daytime responsibly to consider.

Research on melatonin should not be used as an excuse for lazy bones. At best, melatonin comes on from 10 p.m. to 2 a.m. and one must take advantage of that by sleeping. Whatever one is doing at the time it comes on, it does not deflect from the fact that everyone is given an equal number of hours each day and an equal number of hours each week. It is then the lookout for everyone to use time responsibly.

Telephone and Internet communications intercepted

August 18, 2006: An excerpt from a story in The Detroit News

Bush wiretaps illegal

Feds will appeal Detroit judge's ruling

By GREGG KRUPA

Let’s see what happens next. This is great America. Let’s see the example she gives to the world. In other countries like Maharlika, the President can easily escape from persecution, thanks to her party mates and the influence of whatever church group favors her.

Where telephone and Internet communications are intercepted without warrants, in the local level, it can always be done. Now, this is a test case for America. Let's see how American justice can be any different.

For terrorism you say?

Johnny, How did you know?

Tips For racial profiling (by BigBadJohnny)

My friend,

How did you know all these things? It looks like a case of just answering the police officer in a manner just to save one's skin. But after that, what? And how can you be so sure of your liberty after mouthing out lies?

Why should I deny that I believe in a Supreme Being? Will the police take my lie for his question?

Oh, Johnny, come on! You're like one teaching children with lollypops still in their mouths. Have you forgotten that people now stand more for their rights, and speak out their minds? Are you not tired of being bullied that long? I would rather tell the truth than expect lies to protect me.

Here's to freedom!

The Problem is that IQ is not EQ

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Commendable! You can only find one in a million people like this. Unspoiled by materialism, power, and attention. However, I think he is over-doing it to the point of making such an attitude a liability.

If the story is true - 1) that he is unemployed, and 2) that he is depending on her mother’s $74 pension, then spurning a million-dollar prize for his solution to a century-old puzzle known as the Poincare Conjecture is indeed foolish.

Imagine what a million-dollar prize would do. If Grigory "Grisha" Perelman did not want the money, then he could just donate it to charity. Wouldn’t he be able to help his mother a lot with this money instead of being a burden to her financially? If his mother knew of his decision, would she be happy with this “innate modesty” of his son?

The story presents a side of him, too, as having been affected with what people thought of him. It is said he was not re-elected in the Steklov Institute in St Petersburg as a member in 2003 wherein he suffered a crisis of confidence and since then set himself apart.

Now that Perelman has shown himself smarter than most, his shunning a prize and lack of interest in it all the more shows him as proud and incapable of adjusting to the flaws of others. Well, after all, research says intelligence quotient is not necessarily emotional quotient.

When we think about it, our gifts are not exclusively ours. They were given for a noble purpose, therefore, should not be taken lightly as absolutely ours to decide what fate they would fall under. We could use our gifts and what influence and good they bring to help other people and society as a whole.

News . . . . Here it comes

Animal Compassion Like no Other

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Man can learn from such show of animal compassion. It would do a lot of good for society if this kind of monitoring translate into documentaries and finally into movies for wider viewing. In our day-to-day concerns sometimes we lose awareness of others and show no concern for their suffering - much less want to do something, although we see them very much in need of our understanding.

Go, Research and Talk about Depleted Uranium

Re: U.S. Soldiers are Sick of It

Associated Press 10:20 AM Aug, 12, 2006
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A letter to the soldiers:

Yes, please do research. That is the only recourse for anyone wanting answers. Radiation is really invisible, tasteless, has no smell and its presence very hard to prove.

One thing though that you have to be ready to face is this: Any stand on depleted uranium (DU) needs a study or research for basis. Research to be conclusive of its findings needs numbers “to be clinically significant." In this regard, you will hardly have the required percentage because the gargantuan total population of soldiers expected to have been subjected to depleted uranium must be considered. This is the tyranny in numbers.

A mild example that could be given for this is the case of a cosmetic drug suspected to induce suicidal tendencies. There were several adverse drug reaction reports on this that included psychotic tendencies received by the FDA but it could not stop its manufacture – because of numbers. The British Association of Dermatologists was saying it needed at least 80,000 volunteers to be tested for the drug for findings to be conclusive.

Now, in your case they laugh at your measly 32 because it is “far too small” But 32 is 32 lives, you say? Because the number of soldiers in both Iraq wars is more than 900,000 – and this becomes the so-called population from which you base your sample.

Right, go around and tell your comrades about DU – and its possibilities. Perhaps you might yet save others from becoming zombies like you. While others need numbers in order to move, you have your dear health at stake. There is nothing better than health that man needs to hold on to in order to survive. How else can you think when you also lose your brain to DU?

Postscript: Wired News had reported that this was written by Anonymous, perhaps because I had attended to posting first before updating my account then. Here was my follow up -

I wrote this letter. And I am responsible for...janeabao on 08/14/06 4:55 GMT

I wrote this letter. And I am responsible for what I wrote. I am wondering why it came out as written by "anonymous." Please make the necessary correction.
janeabao

And this guy backs me up!

"DU is 60% as radioactive as natural...yogrr on 08/15/06 8:53 GMT

"DU is 60% as radioactive as natural uranium". Technically true, but uranium can't be found in "pure" form in nature. It is mined from rocks containing about 0.1% uranium oxide. On the other hand, depleted uranium shells used by the U.S. Army contain 96.5% uranium. That explains why the alloy used in DU shells is actually hundreds of times more radioactive than any uranium ore found in nature.

None among the Foolish shall Understand

Evangelicals urge museum to hide man's ancestors
By Mike Pflanz in Nairob

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From the title alone, Telegraph is in no better position to understand man’s creation than the reporter. To say “hide man’s ancestors” is already assuming that indeed man has evolved from apes! How ready are you to accept such a conclusion?

Granting that man has evolved, why did man today have to stop evolving from his present self that he fails to come to a higher level of understanding and insist on believing he has evolved?

There is no stopping those who prefer to remain fools. Those who refuse to believe that there is a higher being and that man has a better destiny than just evolve, are part of those prophesied to lack understanding. Indeed, the Bible says, none among the foolish shall understand.

Measuring the Preacher Soriano of Dating Daan

Re: Movie-TV board suspends Brother Eli’s ‘Dating Daan’
By Bayani San Diego Jr.
Inquirer
Last updated 00:54am (Mla time) 08/13/2006

Published on page F1 of the August 13, 2006 issue of the Philippine Daily Inquirer.

The reporter wrote: Laguardia quoted the memo, which stated: “[The] utterances of Soriano… constitute a violation of Section 3, par. (c), v and vii of Presidential Decree No. 1986 and its Implementing Rules and Regulations.”

When you write news and you mention a law or statute or whatever regulation you said is being violated, you should spell out or at least give a gist of the concerned regulation. At least when you do this, you preclude mistaking paragraphs that are supposed to be violated. In this regard, I think your writer is mixed up in mentioning the supposed paragraphs. Paragraph v is about drugs.

I have scanned for that regulation from the Internet and this is what it says of Section 3, par. (c), v and vii of Presidential Decree No. 1986

SECTION 3. Powers and Functions. - The BOARD shall have the following functions, powers and duties:

c) To approve or disapprove, delete objectionable portions from and/or prohibit the importation, exportation, production, copying, distribution, sale, lease, exhibition and/or television broadcast of the motion pictures, television programs and publicity materials subject of the preceding paragraph, which, in the judgment of the board applying contemporary Filipino cultural values as standard, are objectionable for being immoral, indecent, contrary to law and/or good customs, injurious to the prestige of the Republic of the Philippines or its people, or with a dangerous tendency to encourage the commission of violence or of wrong or crime, such as but not limited to:

i) Those which tend to incite subversion, insurrection, rebellion or sedition against the State, or otherwise threaten the economic and/or political stability of the State;

ii) Those which tend to undermine the faith and confidence of the people in their government and/or the duly constituted authorities;

iii) Those which glorify criminals or condone crimes;

iv) Those which serve no other purpose but to satisfy the market for violence or pornography;

v) Those which tend to abet the traffic in and use of prohibited drugs;

vi) Those which are libelous or defamatory to the good name and reputation of any person, whether living or dead; and

vii) Those which may constitute contempt of court or of any quasi-judicial tribunal, or pertain to matter which are sub-judice in nature.

Provided, however, That deletions or cuts must not be made on the master negative of the films, and that such master negative shall be deposited with the Film Archives of the Philippines and shall be released for export purposes to the film owner only upon showing of the proper export permit; Provided, finally, That the film owner shall execute his own undertaking that such master negative shall be exclusively used for export purposes and not for local showing;

To supervise, regulate, and grant, deny or cancel, permits for the importation, exportation, production, copying, distribution, sale, lease, exhibition, and/or television broadcast of all motion pictures, television programs and publicity materials, to the end that no such pictures, programs and materials as are determined by the BOARD to be objectionable in accordance with paragraph (c) hereof shall be imported, exported, produced, copied, reproduced, distributed, sold, leased, exhibited and/or broadcast by television;

Respondent Eliseo Soriano can be better appreciated for his merits or demerits by looking into where he comes from.

First, Soriano is a preacher tasked to spread the word of God. Second, because of his mission, he has the Bible for his authority on the width and breadth of his speaking. Therefore, in case of conflict, he would take the first cause.

Telling the truth – if only to use it for the spread of God’s word, has no limits. For example, what bad practices he sees that must be stopped, Soriano would tell it as it is. Otherwise, he would fail in his mission.

This is the lot of a preacher faithful in his mission. He would willingly suffer than fail in his task. Let the whole world be against him but he has his God to satisfy. Laws that are man-made, if they contravene God’s word, are toothless. He has a more powerful God to obey.

Sharpening the Mind

FOR Asad Yawar (AlexYawar)
Is the Internet killing the Protestant work ethic?
The World Wide Waste?

The Internet is viewed differently by each worker. It depends upon the individual really – whether she uses it for just playing, whiling away the time for chatting, trying to win games, or enjoying some shows.

There are others, however, who make use of the Internet in the most positive way, looking for ways to improve themselves. In between heavy writing tasks, they would take time to shift attention by reading publications, reacting to them, or developing their own blogs. I refer to this group that lately got media attention. In cyberspeak, they are referred to as bloggers that media now considers as possible source for news, opinions, and ideas.

These kinds usually are into many sites - of critical thinking organizations, of language experts, and of several writers’ groups and news organizations. They are there to read ideas, react, and contribute their share sometimes by writing. They do this as diversion. And in doing so, would they be considered wasting time?

In the long run, they can contribute to the organization just by developing their thinking. As such, they will have earned their salaries in a more profound and lasting manner as they use their minds in speaking at meetings, in writing for publications, in research, in proposing for changes, in reaching out to policy makers, and many more. The trick is in being able to set a balance so that work itself does not become the diversion while navigating the Internet becomes the rule.

The truth is, we do not measure productivity by constantly making sure that workers pound directly on the product. It is best that they take time to calibrate their mind, which is the necessary tool for thinking.

koteet, 2006/08/13 00:38

Don't abandon questions

FOR Deepak Adhikari (deeplog)
A Nepali Journalist Abroad - OhmyNews International
An interview with Dharma Adhikari on blogs, citizen journalism and mainstream media

"So write with empathy, not cynicism."

I hope you don't mean readily believing what one sees and hears. When one is a critical thinker, she takes things slower than most others, asking herself why, why, why.

koteet, 2006/07/31 14:31

Female Bus Driver Accused of Raping Boy, 13

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The details in the story are scanty. The writer should have written more backgrounder for reader appreciation. But the topic is quite alarming!

Male or female, the evil knows no gender. This is so because the adversary - who uses willing people - knows that he has but a short time left.

Listening to radio a matter of life, death

JERUSALEM -- A radio station that broadcasts silence has become popular in Israel since the war with Hezbollah began a month ago.

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War and its cruelty has always been with Israel ever since. Rooting from the biblical times, every child born an Israelite will have to be a war baby. He then has to live through life - running away as if forever. Somehow, Israel had its fill of “favored nation” history, which may explain why it has to deal with wars until now – small but protracted – as though needing to learn a lesson. But isn't this the lot of those being loved and cherished?

Blogs in Research Too

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For Article: Bloggers as Sources: What's Your Take?
Posted by Jane Abao 8/8/2006 9:26:08 PM

I don’t come mainly from a news organization but I do write news. In writing for news, I have not thought of using blogs as... I don’t come mainly from a news organization but I do write news. In writing for news, I have not thought of using blogs as my source. However, I had tried using it for research.

There was a time I had to look into [Product A] and its so-called prime, and its relationship to [Product B], another competitor. This calls for user input, I thought. I did not have the luxury to do surveys as my primary obligation was to write - from literature.

I was blessed to find blogs of one who seemingly acted as press relations man but not quite. He was writing about the sponsored surveys of [Product A] and giving out statistics, and developments regarding the product. I had included his write-ups in my review since they were not opinion pieces. Moreover, his blogs had allowed a comments portion where users were able to argue their cases.

In his blogs, I was able to collect a good portion of comments from direct users of both products from the United States and United Kingdom - debating well on the issues. From there, my research was enlightened about one category and that was location of users. At the same time that some of these commenters accused the blogger of public relations, they wrote very useful information.

In a set-up where the piece is followed by comments from the public, I guess blogs can be useful even in news. What is important, I think, is not in their identity because bloggers use only user names, but what information they were sharing. In the case I am discussing, the main writer whose writings were being commented on, had his full name in the very first piece he wrote for the company. I had to trace it from there and that’s where I discovered he was being introduced as an intern from the University of Virginia. This information was very important to me, as I was able to identify him in his subsequent blogs.

To me, my research was enhanced by my inclusion of those information from the blogs.

The Ism or the Journalists?

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Posted by Jane Abao 8/7/2006 7:44:26 PM

The Newsletter of August 7, 2006 on the line-up for seminars at the right portion says CitJ + Pro Journalism? By Amy Gahran. However, on... The Newsletter of August 7, 2006 on the line-up for seminars at the right portion says CitJ + Pro Journalism? By Amy Gahran. However, on clicking for contents, I found Amy talking about Jay Rosen’s Citizen + Pro Journalists + Money = NewAssignment.net.

I say, there is a world of difference between talking about the ism and talking about the mix of journalists. Citizen Journalism already claims it is a mix of citizen journalists and professional journalists. I had expected a discussion on the ism as promised by the tickler first mentioned.

On the ism, how does one do this despite the fact that the two work on different paths? For example, while one would go for inverted pyramid, the other one comes in whatever form. While one comes, following time-honored approaches, the other one follows an uncharted path. While one comes edited, the other one comes pristine, unedited, fresh from the citizen, etcetera.

How does one ride astride these two horses? Is it possible?

Being an Intellectual

FOR cobert (criticalthinking.org)

You Otta Be an Intellectual!

My interest in ‘disinterested knowledge’ has led me to many of your discussions on the topic in the following sites aside from the Criticalthinking Forums: 1) James Randi Educational Forum, 2) Hypography Science Forums, 3) PhysOrgForums, and 4) ShadowsIntheCave.com. I don’t know where else you log in.

I find you are yourself a book to read. I will take time to read them all – in my already tight time. It is better than the senseless communication people today spend time in. At least I know I wouldn’t be wasting precious time.

In some of these sites, you leave some personal touch and it is easier to understand you because you leave some history of your thinking on some constructs.

Thank God for the kind of people like you.

Masturbate-a-thon?

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What kind of Reutersspeak is this? Because public masturbation is encouraged to raise amounts, are we now going towards public sex? And for how much per time, per exposure? Are we now that destitute for money? Heaven forbid that we all be punished for these. May only the masterminds have their due.

Gestation in 20 Seconds

FOR Matt Pressnall

9 months of gestation in 20 seconds

So where is motherhood in the whole scheme of things? This video may be funny but has no sensitivity for womanhood. It maybe all right for entertainment in the homes of those concerned but not for public consumption.

How far are they going to tear eve for laughs? As it is, being woman is already being minority. If you make merchandise of this video, it is already perversion on your part. But the more hell for those who have conceptualized this.

What makes us human?

FOR Dr. Armand Leroi
Imperial College London

Re: The unfortunate 'rat people' of Pakistan could provide the answer.

What makes us human? Not this gene or that gene. Not being free from being a chua or a rat. What makes us human? It is the capacity to love this kind of people, to accept them as they were made. Or should we make specimens of them as freaks from malfunctioning human parts? How do we know our premise is right?

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/core/Content/
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2006/08/01/echuman01.xml&site=17&page=0

Missing the water for the cola

FOR Sylvia Rozario
(merinews, Power to People)
Missing the water for the cola
05 August 2006, Saturday

We blame the cola companies, of course, because it is their lookout to make sure that the water they use is clean and uncontaminated. You do not point a finger on somebody assuming he is faultless so that you can be faultless. The government is quite far from the chemical pots of the cola companies. Even if they place proper norms against adulteration, the so-called chemists may not obey them. It does not need an implementor of rules to act before one does his job properly. It is not really a case of stimulus-response, you know. The cola companies are not inert bodies peopled with unthinking individuals. They have minds of their own – even without government cranking norms for them. Therefore, the cola companies take the blame – not the government, not the media.

Why do Bloggers Blog?

FOR Dr. William R. Adan

You wrote: I don't quite understand why some people are in [blogging].

"Blog" is derived from the words web and log. Blogs are the media these days. Blogs may be projected in Google through metadata and they can be scanned when one conducts a search. From there, they can be picked up for use.

Blogs afford the writer some voice and some power. Access to traditional media is limited as we can see.

You wrote: So you don't have to be sad about how events in writing turn out.

Most bloggers blog to be able to respond to events. Without a ready venue for writing, blogs offer a perfect answer to this need.

I have my own blogs, but I stay connected with Poynter Institute and OhMyNews International, and some writers' sites besides. The first is a journalism institute and the other one works along citizen journalism. So I ride astride two horses with differing thoughts. I am curious with citizen journalism and am sympathetic to their cause, but this early I know I lack the nerve to be reading the stories. It needs patience since most citizen journalism outputs do not come in the package and approaches we were taught in school.

I have the hunch that these people are at the forefront today. It also seems they get the more respect. You know how traditional media is detested now because of its failings. And with it, traditional journalists are not looked upon with the same regard they had before.

You wrote: Writing is a grand exercise. Crafting words, lines and phrases excites and disciplines the mind and by itself is rewarding.

I say, you've answered your own question.

Bloggers with a Fight

FOR Marsha Walton, CNN

For Article: Cell phones: A new tool in the war-zone blogosphere
Posted by Jane Abao 8/2/2006 10:35:52 PM

We cannot pigeon-hole bloggers into one. There are some blogs that are as knowlegeable and disciplined as the bloggers could put it - because th...We cannot pigeon-hole bloggers into one. There are some blogs that are as knowlegeable and disciplined as the bloggers could put it - because they have been formally trained in journalism and communication. It is only that they do not have the same exposure as others. This explains why we think this kind does not exist.

Some blogs go beyond what people think as just ranting. They even have a fight focused. I, for one, am fighting against the way people freely use communication as an art - as stray bullets leaving people with plenty of scars. There are many decadent ways communication could go. I zero in on that.

Mountains Are Never Conquered

. . . But try bitterness

3 Principles to Overcoming Schizophrenia

FOR BrambleCat (writing.com)

Comment: Principle 1 is stated well. It is acknowledging the presence of everyone in space with equal rights on equal footing. This principle is properly one that should apply to everyone.

Principle 2 - You will still exist at the end of the day.

Comment: How can you be so sure? We do not own our tomorrows – let alone today. We are but a vapor that in a moment can just be gone. At best, this is only trying to baby-pat the patient, trying to assure her of something that is not sure to be there.

What would be more assuring is to find out how one is “encapsulated by one’s body.” This means finding out that one is more than flesh and bones and what this all means in the whole scheme of things. Then one can truly know one’s place in the sun instead of just self-assurance that indeed one exists.

Principle 2 -You will still exist at the end of the day - you are encapsulated by your body. Focus on this to retain your sense of self. No matter what happens, it won't kill you (by destroying your sense of 'self') - you'll always be you.

Comment: One’s sense of true self can only come from truth – not what one thinks she is. This then needs referring to judgement from one of higher existence who is fit to judge the person and has to do with her existence. And who could this be but her engineer – her maker who knows her through and through?

One of the best things afforded human beings is the capacity to change for good. So, to seek shelter from this freedom is comforting enough that a person cannot always be herself. A person is not naturally good and not infinitely bad that she needs to change now and then.

Psychologist Ronald Bassman, once diagnosed and treated for schizophrenia, said, “When you become a mental patient, you are no longer regarded as a whole person.” Your suggestions may have come from this common perception and you deserve empathy for your pointers. The best doctor we have, however, and the one that can assure us acceptance and love without conditions is no one but our maker. Let us seek His solace because what man offers is lacking. Having done that, we can be strong enough to face the world.

No matter what happens it won't kill you.

Comment: What is the “it?” Schizophrenia? Let me re-direct this: No matter what happens, we have this much acceptance and love from our maker, the one who judges everyone and whose judgement is righteous and just – no matter who we are. This much we can expect.

Principle 3: YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT OTHER PEOPLE WILL SAY IN ADVANCE. When you pose an idea or ask a question, do not allow yourself to visualize what they will say – do….

Comment: Yes, don’t anticipate. Do not denigrate yourself. Not everyone in this world is cruel. Some people understand. Some people have loving minds and thinking hearts. It is possible, and not everything is lost.

General comment: This is a piece that tries to reach out to schizophrenics. I commend your efforts in making your writing useful. Not every writer would do that. It could readily be seen that you are privy to the lives of those suffering from schizophrenia, and know their needs.

I suggest that you dig deeper into your memories to arrange and reinforce your principles. I can also see that you can develop this into an essay rather than enumerating principles. Start by defining what Schizophrenia is, medically. Then you can progress by describing what Schizophrenia is to people in general and what Schizophrenia means to the patient. Point out the differences without directly comparing. Then recap with a definition and description of a recommended outlook on Schizophrenics (Who but the maker has the proper outlook?). Finally, you can add your modified principles.

Big Words are Useless

FOR Critical Thinkers (criticalthinkers.org)

What did either of them want to say?

1) It’s the question of how intelligence may inform action, and how action may bear the fruit of increased insight into meaning: a clear view of the values that are worthwhile and of the means by which they are to be made secure in experienced objects. Construction of ideals in general and their sentimental glorification are easy; the responsivilities both of studious thought and of action are shirked.

2)What?! Glib gibberish exuding pseudo-truths in witty yet empty metaphors, connected by abstruse references to common things, convoluted happily into a stream of pretty words bearing no relevance to previous posts. Then end the stream of twisted thought with a drive-by trite sentiment and shirk any real confrontation or exposition. Bon voyage! Look out! Don't forget to cover your mouth when you yawn!

Is critical thinking getting to be that snobbish?

Life is not So Well Arranged

We Stop Where We See a Gate.

A Letter of Deep Feelings

Feelings inside bursting like lava of a volcano
A Letter of Deep Feelings"
FOR Alimohkon (writing.com)

This is an entirely different genre from the two write-ups on writing that you earlier wrote with this bunch. There is nothing that binds them with your title "Lollypops and Kisses." First, Lollypops can only refer to this letter as it is about family. It can only apply to writing in the sense of growing up as a budding one - but you sound like one knowing the ropes.

This piece talks mainly about property. I suggest you find other ways of making it stand alone. Re-write it not entirely as a letter. Your reader will then expand to not just your "Sister" whom you are addressing. Then it can become more useful.

An interesting way is to color it with the theme of social responsibility. Start your write-up talking about this thing, for example, about property dividing families. Your letter can then be integrated in the middle or at the end - after you have sufficiently discussed your theme.

Lazy Writing (Edited lazily)
FOR Alimohkon (writing.com)

This piece is a combination of advice to budding writers and some philosophical musings. Nice writing! However, for the purpose of publication, editors would prefer writing that has focus. To make them see meaningful ends, I suggest that you make the best of both worlds: separate your advice and philosophy and develop each of them. They both can stand on their own merits, given some more flesh and direction.

Lollypops & Kisses (My Essays)"
FOR Alimohkon

Shades of male chauvinism! You may read amusing to your kind (har-de-har-har for you) but to the opposite gender, you will sound negative. I suggest you re-direct your funny bone to the taste of your target readership. Principle of homophily, you know. Didn't you want the Eve side of the family to read this? Or did you want to keep them out? Then, retain your Viagra laugh.

You can be funny and eat your cake, too. This is your door. Make it a little pleasant. And I thought you were serving coffee?

Better the Men than Women Bloggers

Article Feedback

Better the Men
For Article: New Pew Blogger Study
Posted by Jane Abao 7/24/2006 9:54:13 PM

I was wondering why among the topics categorized there was nothing for communications or media. Perhaps if there were a category for “others...I was wondering why among the topics categorized there was nothing for communications or media. Perhaps if there were a category for “others,” this topic would belong there.

Don’t people talk much against the stupid boob tube? The news that are not news because they are manufactured – whether in print or in cyberspace? Or do people just talk but never write about them? Blogging is just like talking. I wonder where the complaints about wayward media go.

I would appreciate the men better. At least they write deeply about this topic – not just in blogs but also in scholarly publications.

Touch of the Savage, Would You dare?

The Weathergod

Thoughts of the Weathergod
the weathergod
FOR Macbeth (writing.com)

Review follows -
I am the weathergod. Which is to say ‘the order in the chaos’ and I am frankly feeling quite energized these days. I can really feel the sun on my face, it is so “what can I say?” energizing. I am wondering what am I to do with all this energy now coursing so wildly through my veins that it almost makes me giddy? Yes I have a human form. Short, fat, bald, and ugly, with a mean disposition and a bad attitude.

Comment: Delete “Which is to say” because you distract the flow of thought. Go straight to your point; you have started right.

Comment: You are already saying things; you are already wondering; you don’t have to state that you are doing these things. Don’t answer your own questions unless it is for emphasis.

Comment: Consider this version:

I am the weathergod - ‘the order in the chaos.’ I am so full of energy. I can feel the sun on my face. I am all energy. I am giddy.

Yes, I have a human form. Short, fat, bald, and ugly, with a mean disposition and a bad attitude.

Comment: Instead of “telling” your reader, show your reader the kind of character the persona has by his actions or words.

There are a number of you who call my name, sometimes in a whisper out of fear that I might hear the words and come looking for the source. Sometimes it is in the form of a curse that I have not listened and in paradox not listening still.

Comment: Write “mention,” not “call,” since your thought in this paragraph runs negative. “Calling one’s name” is positive.

Comment: Listened to …

Comment: Delete “and in paradox.” They disrupt the flow of thought.

I cannot just grant you the weather that you want though I have been known to do things on a whim or even less. But and it’s a big but You must be somewhat specific in your request for weather for you must realize that in dealing with the law of unexpected consequence there is no knowing. Either how big the storm is growing or even where it’s going. Much like the idea that for every action there is an action in reciprocal even good deeds do not go unpunished.

Comment: What kind of god are you introducing? Whimsical?

Comment: If it is “but and only but,” the character must be specific in his instruction or order and not say “somewhat.”

Comment: Let your “god” project a powerful voice and speak like one powerful.

Much like the idea that for every action there is an action in reciprocal even good deeds do not go unpunished.

Comment: What did you want to say? Is it this? - “For every action, there is a reward. No matter how you try to make amends with good deeds, bad deeds do not go unpunished.”

Remember, for the sake of argument, that I am not predicting the weather, I am not the weather channel. The expression of explanation that comes to mind is “let it be so, let it be done.”

Comment: A god-character will not say, “for the sake of argument.” Make your god realistic.

Comment: Notice how the statements gather strength as they simplify -

I do not predict the weather; I am not the weather channel. What comes to mind, I will do. Let it be so, let it be done.

Each of the following details has a full spectrum of possibility but remember for the sake of clarity I am more into the doing than undoing but there are things once done that will have no undoing once a path is followed. As words of warning there is an old adage that relents ‘be careful what you wish for’, which is to say in another way ‘the devil is in the details’.

Comment: Again a god does not have to explain himself all the time. “For the sake of clarity” is more like someone arguing with a co-equal.

Comment: “I am more into the doing than undoing” is again condescending. A god-character would talk directly. Notice the change –

Anything is possible [Let’s allow this statement to incorporate your original thought]. However, what I do, I do. And no one can stop it.

Comment: A god-character does not refer to adages, else how can your character project power?

As words of warning there is an old adage that relents ‘be careful what you wish for’, which is to say in another way ‘the devil is in the details’.

Comment: Go directly, so – Be careful of what you wish for; the devil is in the details.

Advance notice is required for all requests for weather regardless of their merit. If you are in the middle of a blizzard a change in intensity rather than cessation might be looked at more favourably. Otherwise, seven revolutions rather than degrees is usually the lower perceptional limit. The more notice the better the results and their distant echoes, for one is better able to maintain equilibrium and balance opposing forces.

Comment: Why advance notice? I thought your god is powerful.

Type, intensity, location, time, duration.

Does your type of weather require some form of precipitation? The type of precipitation is mostly related to the relative temperature but the sequencing can get complicated and I have been known to bend the rules. Though there are physical laws that one must still obey I can do snow in the Sahara, I just have to take it from somewhere else. It is in the taking that all things become at once possible and unpredictable.

What kind of intensity of weather do you require? A summer’s breeze from here to the horizon or a category 5 in full overwhelming rotation. They named the Horse Latitudes so because in the days of sailing ships when the wind did not blow at all for weeks on end the horses were the first to go, overboard I mean. Do you want it to rain cats and dogs or cars and trucks or should I just spit?

Comment: They named the Horse Latitudes as such….

For a geographic location, realistic parameters are required. It is difficult to alter things just because of political borders, though I have been known to do arbitrary boundaries. Best perhaps to decide a center point with a randomly varying radius and feather to the edges?

The duration of weather is important. Timing is a critical thing and can make all the difference between success and failure of intent. It takes awhile to get to category 5 but even they must end. You don’t want to plug the sink and leave the tap running so a start and finish is required. Though in Vancouver, Canada the rain never seems to end.

Comment: However in Vancouver….

for Ed Dobbins,050805,tilt,the Sahara,light rain, North Central, 1 degree, now.
for DOT, 050819,tilt,The Golden Triangle, torrential rain, 15 degrees, now.

Comment: Are the spacing here technical or intentional?

General comment: Your story may find some problems with the readers because of your “god figure.” It seems like your god is an innocuous god who is not exactly one above mortals. First, he is too condescending for mortals that he had to explain himself now and then.

Your story gets to be appreciated only as it advances – primarily because of the weak god figure. You started with a god that appears a bit unsure of himself in the beginning, keeps on collegial terms with his audience in the middle, and ends up amusing in the end. It is only by the end that he gets readily lovable/acceptable to the reader by his revealed knowledge of weather-making.

As a writer, you have a good grasp of weather technology. Being knowledgeable in some field is an advantage to writers in technical writing. As shown by you, however, this skill may also be employed for creative writing. Keep on honing your skills and you’ll be fine.

It is very rare that technical knowledge is used for creative items – let alone for amusement or entertainment – and the field is still clear. You are doubly blessed. You can take this opportunity to build a profile in it. According to research, children’s and family literature takes the biggest share in print publications today, but it appears true also in cyberspace. Your skill, therefore, would be very useful in this category.

Re: Art without Parameters

FROM Alimohkon (writing.com)

That's right, people claim rights, privileges, anything they can get (out of nothing), without defining responsibility.

A poet does not own his poetry. It becomes everybody's I think. And that should be a poet's reward - once his poem is spoken by others.

In Dean Baker's ebook "The Conservative Nanny State", the point is apparent. You can't claim you own that software for all eternity. It's not yours. The same with art. Bill Gates tries to portray to the world that he is now a charitable billionaire. But that's not true. Our NBIs are raiding internet cafes to serve Microsoft rights. Is that right?

We have a responsibility to write - good writing. And this good writing must be shared, with no strings attached.

FROM fprine (iTalkNews.com)

Art (in its many forms) should have its parameters defined by its audience (or community). For example, many non-artist types (or those not educated in art or art history like me) would have difficulty calling much of the modern art in the past 20 years as art. Their parameters would be classical and more stringent. However, those in the art community would have different parameters and thus conclude differently. Good article.

……………………….

FOR Alimohkon (writing.com)

Right! In fact, I have developed a blog on communications activism. That's what I call it. I have coined the word and that's what I call my fight.

They say I am a fascist for fighting against poems, but really, it is in these things called art that people try to hide while polluting the space with all unlimited liberty. There are beautiful ways art could be useful and not be decadent. Why do these negative things have to be foisted on us?

I don’t think I am alone with this thinking. I will have the parents who care for their children. I will have those who care about values – people who respect other people’s rights.

FOR fprine (iTalkNews.com)

Thanks, fprine,
Many think I am being facist in my beliefs about art, but the truth is that much of what art we have today are decadent.

Unspoken Truths

FOR jessi- forever grateful (writing.com)

Review follows -

You said: How do you know I would want you too?
Obviously, this is typographical error. "Too" should be "to."

Graphics
The tone of the author could be readily felt. The emotion is graphically painted. The situation is clearly presented. Promising work!

Truth
A poem, however, as an essay, a dissertation, or a book, is not free from respecting realities in life.

A situation that directly applies to this case is knowing some truth that one doesn’t – for example, the prognosis a doctor gives of one’s disease.

A reality in life is that people want to be told if they are dying or not – to know everything the doctor said. A reality in life is also that our people love us so much, they would like to see us happy and free from worries.

What each of these two groups have is information about someone slowly slipping away. The question now is, who is the owner of the information? By owner, then one can dispense with the data the way he sees it. This, however, needs qualifications.

To understand the context, who is most affected when not given the necessary data? The patient, because he may not be able to make use of the time left for him if he did not know. The parents or loved ones, because they are charged with taking care of the patient and his other concerns including hospital bills.

How much?
How much does not seem to matter, more than why one should know. The reason the doctor does not tell the patient directly is that not all patients know how to handle information about their health. If they knew, their health might grow worse from worrying.

Is it a right to know?
It is not a right more than what is for the best interests of the patient. What is paramount then is the attitude of knowing that one has this and that much to live, or that one has this disease, or that one has this truth to one’s life. If the patient can have the proper attitude of welcoming his mortality, then there is no problem. Proper attitude or not, however, should the patient find out the truth, one cannot tell how much bitterness would come out of the case.

As the poem laments, the author was not given the chance to appreciate those data. It is clear that he had found out later on what secrets were kept from him. It is up to him now to weigh this question: if he knew, what would he have done? For his betterment, or for his worse?

Cause to Wonder

FOR Thinker (writing.com)
Review follows -

You have a very interesting subject. You made a good start. Your opening paragraph ended, wanting to say, why do we do things without thinking? Good!

The second paragraph is supposed to make your objective clearer – what you want to point out. It ends, showing that you’re one person looking for meaning.

The third paragraph shows it is thinking that is your subject. You failed, however, to tie it up with your search for meaning. You left it hanging and without some support. Mentioning that people think you’re weird for thinking, you shift away a little from your topic. It is all right if you had strengthened your base – established and defined strongly your topic (Is it Why we do things without thinking? Or Search for meaning?)

The fourth paragraph talks about war in an attempt to pick up from what you were saying in Paragraph 1. It shows WHAT things we do without thinking (Again, it’s war). However, it has not moved up a bit to show WHY we do things without thinking.

The last paragraph hangs – and talks about an altogether different subject, which is “people management.”

Resolve:

Your second paragraph in reference to your girl friend’s “afterward explaining that communion meant nothing” was your chance to exploit senseless rituals happening in our midst. It could have enriched that paragraph or the succeeding paragraphs to elaborate on things we do without thinking.

Rituals, beliefs handed down by those before us, conventions, customs, so-called sacraments, folkways, customs, and even procedures may be questioned as to their raison d'etre, their explanation, justification, philosophy. Man is a thinking individual as you said and he must do things with reason. These “senseless” procedures could have been described to a stretch to show that indeed man does things without thinking.

Your example of war is easily understood as “War is bad because it causes untold misery and many people die.” Nobody questions this. The one needing an intelligent discussion was your girlfriend’s reaction to your asking questions of an event or ritual because things that we do without questions need to be examined.

As you end your editorial, it is best that you make it very, very clear. It is where you give your punch. By “managed,” did you mean manipulated? Controlled? Make your words point to the same direction. “Managed” is much too positive for the direction of your dissenting (negative) voice.

Confinement

FOR Sueb33730 (writing.com)

Review follows –

The endless two-hour drive leaves my nerves on edge as I finally approach the turn-off to my destination. The flat, barren land looks like a giant desert leaving a dry, scorched feeling in my mouth. I do not know if it is just an illusion, but everything feels dead and desolate.
I stop my car behind a long line of vehicles filled with mothers, children, grandmothers, and friends. All are furiously fanning their bodies in hopes of creating a slight, cooling breeze as sweat runs in rivulets down their flushed faces.
Brake lights flash on and off crazily as the line slowly inches the one hundred yards to the visitor parking lot. A man in policeman's garb gives each car an inspection. The guard unlucky enough to be assigned to this job, always stands as a sentinel void of emotion, like a robot made of steel.

Comment: Better do away with “always” since you are describing just this circumstance.

The inspection allows the officer to record the car make, model, license plate number, number of persons present, and the driver's license number of the person driving. The officer completes his inspection of my car in such a way, that I feel no more important than the cardboard number he passes into my hand, so that my car may leave this place.
The unbreathable toxic fumes arising from exhaust pipes becomes fixed in my throat as my heart begins to race in nervous reluctance due to the thoughts of upcoming confinement.
The concrete feels like coarse sandpaper as I slowly step toward the great barriers before me. The horrifying walls of chain link rise ten feet toward the sky with an added foot of razor wire that seems to laugh that there is no escape once I enter.

Comment: Use of the Subject>Verb>Object pattern is good technique but should not be overused as to bore the reader. The earlier paragraphs are full of these already. Vary the sentence order a bit.

Comment: "with an added foot of razor wire that seems to laugh that there is no escape...." Say seems to “laugh out.” Laughing out what? “That there is no escape once I enter.”

I slowly reach for the metal handle to pass through and a buzzing noise proves that a pair of eyes pierce me as someone unlocks the gate from the tower above. I walk under the gate only to see a duplicate of the previous, giving me the feeling that I am the prisoner here.
The only building I will be allowed to enter looks forlorn and plain with its stark white walls. A woman passes me with tears in her eyes. She must not have known that she had to get permission to visit her loved one.
I enter, sign my name, show identification, get my hand marked with invisible ink, and receive another cardboard number as I advance toward the metal detector. Another guard searches my purse for contraband as I remove all metal objects from my body. He finds nothing, and I am allowed to go on.

I sit down at a table made to accommodate only four people. The stench of sweaty bodies slowly begins to fill the room as every table is taken. I wait an agonizing twenty minutes as many men dressed in all white prison uniforms pass through an opening on the left side of the room. The smoke from hundreds of cigarettes begins to thicken around me.

Comment: Better enter more thoughts here for time lag. Some four sentences will do. If you place the next paragraph right away, the action seems too fast for the reader. Make the reader feel that the next event is something operating on another level.

Comment: By the way, cut up your work into paragraphs. It is easier on the eyes.

Then he enters. I rush into my father's arms as tears course down his and my cheeks. We move back to the table I have chosen to converse for the five hours allotted us.

Comments: Better, “his checks and mine.”

As I pass through the gates on my way back to my car, the land around me takes on a whole new meaning. The air is fresh, and I inhale deeply. I finally notice that there is a wonderful blanket of vividly green grass at my feet. Beautiful trees stand as tall guardians of nature, flowering in the sunshine.

As the prison buildings fade in my rear view mirror, I look forward to the peaceful ride ahead. I think of how wonderful my freedom is, and feel more alive than I have ever felt before.

Comment: Can you add one or more sentences here on freedom? Cherish the moment as in CHERISH.

General comment: Beautiful! Very promising! The feelings are there. As in all writing activities, however, incubate your work. Lay it aside for a time, then go back and read. You'll be able to see more things you had not seen before that may need re-inforcing.